Tanka poem: Fall rising

A brisk gentle breeze
stirs me to observation
of telltale traces
the languidness of the trees
confirms Autumn’s next onset.


2 responses to “Tanka poem: Fall rising

    • Thank you – I’m really happy to know that! I was feeling a tingle as I wrote this tanka (this season tends to make me feel alive like no other); and I’m really happy to have been able to bring that tingle across to readers :-)

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